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All in all, this was a very interesting idea for a story, but quite confusing in some places. There were a few spelling and grammatical errors, but I won't name ...

Basically a good story, had a couple issues with it that were already mentioned. Way out-there idea but in sci-fi that's a good thing! :wink: Yeah, to answer your question, ...

This was a really cute story! It was really funny and sassy...the sixth part I could have lived without, seemed rather cliche what with Ethan suddenly being like "Oh Toby ...

I like the ending to this story, it is tragic and somewhat uplifting at the same time. Very sweet. However, I would have liked to get to know the characters ...

This story had an excellent voice to it. It was all very mysterious and sweet. However, I didn't like the fact that Gabriel was an angel. I was actually thinking ...

Hi Fang, I liked this, it made me want to read more and find out what was going to happen (an effect of the nice cliffhanger ending!) My only concerns ...

I basically liked this. It had a smoothness to it that was kind of comforting but wasn't really different at all. Some grammatical errors: It felt so good knowing he ...

Hmm. I must say that, after reading "One day he just stopped talking" I was expecting something a bit more complicated, or mysterious, than him just getting back together with ...

Hi Night, I liked this poem. It was uplifting, not depressing or angsty, which I liked a lot; you don't find poems like that often, especially ones written by teens. ...

Wow!!!! I'm really impressed!! I loved this story. Except for a few grammatical errors (which were already pointed out) it was great! Keep up the good work! :D

I liked this story a lot, it was really quite believable, although I would have liked it to be a little bit longer; I would have liked to hear more! ...