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Alright, thanks, the language fits a bit more fluidly when you're introduced to the character having the dream, but I'll check into it. Thanks for reading it! Still, quite obviously, ...

I love chicken lettuce wraps, spider rolls (sushi with fried, soft-shell crab) and pretty much all Thai curries, red being my favorite. I'm slightly obsessed with Chinese, Japanese and Thai ...

I dreamt last night that I was a flower in an endless field of flowers. We differed in size, occasionally, but past that, we all seemed to look exactly the ...

Bittersweet, your avatar absolutely cracks me up!

I'm new here but figure why the hell not, may as well throw my picture on in : I'm the guy on the right. Yes, I know I look young. ...

...I assume you invented the "bright color" emos on some sleepover with your friends? I've been browsing the forums pretty steadily since I signed up a few days ago, not ...

In 5th grade I had this awkward Sunday school teacher who tried entirely too hard to be ironically hip. He was like the Bob Saget of my Christian education. Every ...

I think you don't use punctuation to it's fullest extent so the piece, despite it's length, doesn't flow entirely well. There are so many periods in the non dialogue paragraphs ...

I think swearing isn't particularly effective or ineffective in any scenario, but if it's truly the writer's belief that what they are saying is perpetuated in a better way by ...

Maybe it's just me, but I think something this cynical, despite the situation it spawned from in your life, is almost always accented very effectively with humor, which this lacks. ...

In the first sentence "use" should be switched to "used" and, if it were me, I wouldn't use "flood" to describe both your emotions and tears. Use a synonym. When ...