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This is a very nice poem! A lot of times poems will be very repetitive and in my own opinion I find that kind of annoying. In the first line ...

This was great. I know it's a short story but I think making it a tiny bit longer could have given it a better understanding. The first couple of sentences ...

Hello IsItLove. I love the way Maria is so confused on what's happening in the beginning. It makes the readers wonder what happened as well. I also have to agree ...

Wow. What an imagination you have there. Haha, I absolutely loved it. You kept me entertained the entire time. Though I wish you would have added a little more. Made ...

Wow. Fantastic! You definitely caught me off guard when you made Aaron a female, because obviously, I imagined her as a male. Great use of a simile too, "her muscles ...