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Wow. Fantastic! You definitely caught me off guard when you made Aaron a female, because obviously, I imagined her as a male. Great use of a simile too, "her muscles ...

Hello everyone :) My name is Kayli. My friend told me about this website and so far, it's great. I enjoy writing all different types of genres!

Hey Confetti. I loved every second of this. I don't very often read a story in the point of view of an animal. You had some great discriptions in this; ...

Here's Chapter One! Thanks for reading! ---------------------------------------- I knew it was going to be bad the moment the engine rumbled, sputtered and the car lurched to a stop. "You've got ...