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Amazing. You have quite the talent. I can almost picture everything because it all seems so real with the way you described everything. Keep up the good work, tydecker777.

This was quite entertaining. His real name (we found out) is Cassidy Graham, but call him Cassidy and you’ll probably regret it I loved that part. I liked how you ...

Very nice poem! Love the whole meaning of it. But I will agree with the other reviews, I am named for threw me off. Since that was the first line, ...

You had me at the first sentence! What a great talent you have. I'm looking forward to reading some more of your work.

Love how you wrote a poem about the storm! Very clever idea and I would've never thought to do something like this. Great use of descriptive words. The poem really ...

This is a very nice poem! A lot of times poems will be very repetitive and in my own opinion I find that kind of annoying. In the first line ...

This was great. I know it's a short story but I think making it a tiny bit longer could have given it a better understanding. The first couple of sentences ...

Hello skye12! I have to agree with you because I was super nervous to show my work too. But I've gotten some great tips in making my writing even better. ...

Those are pretty cool :) you have quite the talent there

Welcome applejack! This is a great site and I'm sure you'll love it. I'm a newbie myself :)

Here's Chapter Two! I know I need some work, so please help fix any mistakes! I'm open to any ideas. Thanks for reading! ---------------------------------------- Dalton un-zipped his sweatshirt and sl

Hello IsItLove. I love the way Maria is so confused on what's happening in the beginning. It makes the readers wonder what happened as well. I also have to agree ...

Wow. What an imagination you have there. Haha, I absolutely loved it. You kept me entertained the entire time. Though I wish you would have added a little more. Made ...

Great! These lyrics really relate to me because there are times when I have things to say, but I can't figure out how to. I loved it.

Great! I loved how much you described everything. It really makes the little details seem bigger and more realistic. Keep up the good work.