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This was very entertaining! I honestly didn't find any errors except for: ‘Silence!’ he screeched angrily, thudding his gun to the ground. ^ This is what you had, with the ...

This is great. What an imagination you have! This was very entertaining to read but the only thing that threw me off was around the second paragraph: “Hello Kisha, yea ...

Very nice poems! I love how each of them are describing the wonders of nature. I find nature very interesting which is why I loved reading your poems so much! ...

Hey summerlove! What a great story you have going there. I would just like to change a couple things. “Jagger, you’re formally on right guard and Brett you’re left , ...

Loved every second it. You used great descriptive language and that made it easier for me to understand what was going on. I was drawn in by the first couple ...

Beautiful poem. I picture a young girl who's never been loved, but hopes to find those special people to love her. I'm not sure if that's what you portrayed in ...

Very nice lyrics! I can really relate to this because I act like I don't care often, but it really bothers me. The chorus is my favorite part. I feel ...

What? Was this supposed to be funny? Or serious? Hm..

Amazing! It's almost like a story itself. You have such amazing talent. Keep up the great work!

Hello! And welcome. I love this site and I'm sure you will too :) Looking forward to reading your writing!

Love the title first of all. Not to mention the poem itself! This has to be one of my favorites on this site. Keep up the excellent work. Did I ...

Hello! Looking forward to your work!

Welcome! I'm sure you'll love it here. I sure do :) Looking forward to reading your work!

Nice. Very eery, and I like that. I'd have to go with 'undisturbed' as the better fit for that sentence. I find short stories difficult to write because mine always ...

Hello SilverNee! It's great to see so many new people joining. I'm a newb myself and I just love getting all the reviews on my work :) I'm looking forward ...