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Here's Chapter 3! A shorter chapter :) Thanks for reading! ----------------------------------------- I jumped at the sound of tires crunching on gravel. Apparently, I had fallen asleep. Dalton was pas

hahahah i'll definitely write more! thanks for reading! :D

Hey, this was really good! Just thought I'd point something out though: “Run ! ” Trenton yells at me. If Trenton is yelling something, shouldn't there be a exclamation point ...

Hello Katlyn67. Writing a haiku can be very difficult, especially since the rules are 5-7-5. I liked your poem but the ending threw me off. In my own opinion, it ...

Hey paintingtherain97! Her blonde hair that was usually braided and clipped , hung in a messy ponytail, and she was wearing a baggy shirt with sweat-pants. I'm pretty sure 'blonde' ...

3 & 4!

Here's a short story I wrote in Middle School. It was an assignment, and I figured I'd share it with you :) ---------------------------------------- I sat down on the bus, relieved ...

Hi Abigail_W.! I liked this story a lot. You kept it short and sweet and didn't drag it out. I liked the first sentence but I think you should consider ...

Thanks for all the help. I know it wasn't the best. I'll definitely take what all of you said into consideration :) Also chiaro0090, I did the hyphen at the ...

I wrote this a long time ago and just came upon it today. It's kind of cheesy, I know. But hey, I think it's pretty good since I am NOT ...

This was very good! I liked how you kept your poem short and sweet. Longer poems, in my opinon, tend to be a little boring. I liked how you made ...

Hello Aguareed! The first sentence definitely drew me in: The scent of magic threaded its way through the narrow tree trunks and toadstools. I loved the way you started out ...

Thanks everyone for all the replies :D Can't wait to read all your writing!

Hello! Would you mind reviewing the first 2 chapters of my novel "Road to Nowhere" ? It will be greatly appreciated. Be as critical as you wish! :D

Hey ZLYF! This was a very good piece of writing. Though the beginning, in my own oppinion, threw me off. Captain Needew and his men were on this flight for ...