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Re: They are blind!!!
Sadness is the pain. Everything else is numb. Like no blood rushing to the skin. Blue water in her eyes, Tears... Could it be? Hidden with a smile, Pink lips ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: What ill, what hope, what?
I find this cool. It made my day after a long day at school. This explains the pain in a sole that has been lost and no one seems to ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Harmony
First of all that write on thing made me think of Fly on fang from Maximum ride...not the point...yeah I’m glad you noticed that I put it in Si-fi, the ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Harmony
My name…is Yingtai. It means Flower eminent. I sat unaccompanied under the tree at the back of the school where no one would bother me. My head phones on my ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Blank pages
this is really good. I loved reading it, but it could have been longer. eight out of ten...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: Sun and Sky
I’m perplexed is this happy or sad??? When it started out it sounded as if you where upset that the sun came up, but then you made it sound as ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: It Was More Than I Could Stand
nice... i liked it, but there really was no image to it. I'll be nice here and give you a four out of ten. Next time try to really imagen ...
Aug 29, 2011 -
Re: An endless dream
I know this is old, but I really want you to put more in the back story. it would make a grate chapter two if you would excplain what broght ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
Okay I love that you answered your own Q, but why put pore Michael in it what he ever do to you. Nyleen: Mixed worlds I sat on Keres’s tomb…I ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
Okay I love that you answered your own Q, but why put pore Michael in it what he ever do to you. Nyleen: Mixed worlds I sat on Keres’s tomb…I ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: What would happen if?
Okay I love that you answered your own Q, but why put pore Michael in it what he ever do to you. Nyleen: Mixed worlds I sat on Keres’s tomb…I ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: I believed in fairies.
I really like this it spoke the truth of what most kids feel these days.
May 25, 2011 -
Re: Father
I like that you are honest with me i will keep this in mind next time thanks
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Father
Thanks a lot to those who read this. It took me a while to get the courage to put it on YWS but I just needed to get it out. ...
May 22, 2011 -
Re: Father
When I’m crashing down Falling fast Please help me back To the ground Don’t turn away When I cry Because you know I’m crying for you And don’t love me ...
May 22, 2011
