kazie

[pre]"Lost" lost. searching for whatever it is that is missing. Stumbling on jagged rocks. Falling on your knees. scraping away with each loss of footing. feeling smaller with each step. ...

[pre]"Metal Sheets" Silver slits sheets, Sheets upon which She sits. Sorrowly Sweating shadowed crimson Stains. Sanely shedding Slipping slowly shivering Soaked in sticky slimy Stuff. So sad And slit

yeah but i always start them in a jumble b4 i get them structured. its a writing technique i use. more creative and then i format it and it turns ...

[pre]Trying to comprehend the thoughts that swarm in my mind and constantly wishing for more of the things i truely feel inside. cant you see how much i love and ...

its a haiku there isnt much space or syllables for too much. i like it but that is my opinion.

[pre]"The Little Things" The little deeds are the points that make an impact. The little acts of kindness are what makes all the difference. Holding open a door or offering ...

[pre]"Alive" Looking around. Knowing the world is dark and grey. Still wanting to be part of it. Wanting to become real. The world could be full lucid colors. But then ...

actually yea. i feel like my whole world is crumbling. thus so am i.

yea i think its good. i love poetry. i have a whole notebook and as i continue to write they only get better.

[pre]"Holding on" Slowly crumbling down. I try to hold out And to be strong. Keep it together I am told. I sit patiently trying to pretend nothing is wrong. Knowing ...

It has great imagery. i like it. it doesnt suck. maybe you know you could do better but as far as my opinion goes i think it's good!

"Hope" Trying my hardest to find something worth keeping. Something to hold on to. But knowing that i am to be forever on my own.

this was just written as i went. hopefully it's ok. THANKX YOU GUYZ!

"Dealing" Trying to fight with words I dare not say. Angry that you attempt to break me when I am already broken. Annoyed that you always try to hurt me ...

[pre]"Howling" Shining brightly among the stars. Seeing their smiles, Only shining brighter. The clouds that blanket me make the world dreary and cold. the shadows are hidden by the darkness ...