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I actually intended for readers to think that she was alone, that's why I didn't mention Vic XD And Lark's seated on a chair when the two approach him, that's ...

First point: Actually, I was really going for that "I thought she was alone" bit :)) Second point: OH GOD SO IT HAS A NAME. YOU ARE MY SAVIOR. I ...

This is really good. The story itself is quite cliche - except maybe for the dream - but your writing gave it something new. Good job!

Wow, I think yours is the most in-depth review I've ever received. Thanks so much! I've finished chapter two a long time ago, actually, and even posted it on other ...