kawriter

This is a physical description of the character Elma. I wrote it a while ago because I was having trouble picturing her... she kept changing. I think this is how ...

This is a sort of silly piece. It's from a larger piece I'm writing-- so the easy prelude... old woman, always wanted to be a writer, hopefully you like it. ...

First of all, even more than I enjoyed your poem I love your signature. Just saying. Your poem was brilliant. It seemed rather personal, but I think if you're always ...

I loved this poem. It was wonderfully poetic and very creative. I loved the title, in fact it's why I chose to read it. But the more I think about ...

This is another little piece to that bigger piece I'm working on. Because you don't know the background you may not understand everything, but please humor me in pretending you ...

I like this poem. I'd tell you exactly which lines i loved... but it was so short, I liked all of them. I think that you chose a cool topic- ...

So this is another small piece from a larger one I'm working on. I could fill you in on all the background, but I'll spare you and let you just ...

Wow, powerful images in this poem. I was a little confused however why it switches from the person being injured and having glass in their hand to them drowning. Maybe ...

I really like this poem. It's very realatable and the way you organized it, so that the begining makes a statement that the ending explains is really nice. I don't ...

I didn't exactly like this poem and I thought it was sort of cliche... but maybe not in a bad way. Most of the poems I've read by the Young ...

I get what it's like to just post a piece of something bigger... which I hope this is part of. I didn't understand exactly what was going on, but I'm ...

The first picture is actually my favorite. I took a photography class and I think that the "thirds-rule" is usually a good guidline, but it's like writing- some of the ...

Before you read this please keep in mind that it is a small piece for a much bigger piece I'm working on. Please take into consideration that you are reading ...