katngo73

Well, thank you for all your criticism, and I mean that in a good way. Some people asked these questions and I feel like answering them for you. Was Bloom's ...

i'm new to poetry and that......... I guess you can write it in any way, but this poem particularly looked weird.... You need to put it in a ........... i ...

“Yes Mum, I promise.” Bloom replied. Bloom promises her mother that she will do anything to help protect her Mum. “Good, now I love you, Bloom.” Mum said. “And I ...

It's a very nice story. Well, certainly not nice, but I like the way how you wrote it. Maybe in a few sentences you could have added prepositional phrases of ...

very nice..... I like how you had everything in such a great flow! KEEP ON WRITING!!!!!!

Soon they became blood red. I don't get that. Why did they become blood red? You should have just made them blood red in the first place. But otherwise, great ...

very funny. I like how you let the oranges get guns from their belly button. But I still don't get the "ocean" stuff. Plus, you should work on capitalizing U.S.A. ...

I like how you came up with names to match each person's sword. Like Illumia and Darkheart. Very creative, but I don't really understand when you said, Darkheart stabbed viciously ...

Very touching.... I've never read anything like this before, but I love it! It's been very descriptive.... with metaphors and similes. You certainly have a way with words.

Great Job! I like how you made it work together in such a great flow!!!!!! But you need to spell check aLOT. Remember to Capitalize the first letter of ur ...

Sorry, I'm really young here. and I really just wanted to post something right away. SORRY!!!!!!!!!!

I was speechless. I haven't quite grasped poetry yet, and I think of yours as a good start for me. awesome!

Detective: Princeton, that is I who certainly appreciates this splendid invite to the Courthouse of L'adoure. Samuel: Why, then, come in! Come in, detective!! Detective: Thank you, Sir Samuel. Lady ...