katngo73

I googled websites for young writers, and here I am!!!

I have a question, what does Pat Buchanan mean?

Hi, I'm a funky girl named Kat Ngo. I got heart surgery at two weeks old. I still have the scar where they cut open my chest to look at ...

this poem is pretty good, but you need to separate it into stanzas to separate each new thought: I pause, hoping you'll reconsider, Call my name. Wait. Change of heart. ...

thank you for your review and criticism and I mean that in a good way!! thank you everybody!!!!!!!!!!!

hi emmylove, this poem was pretty good, but I think I can point out things that disrupted the flow!! Okay? Good. I swam across an empty land. I knew the ...

:O My jaw was just hanging open. I've never actually read such an amazing poem!!!!!! AWESOME JOB, YO!!!!!!!! I love the last stanza: It’s a shame, is it not?— Between ...

well, this is a pretty good poem, I love how you started out, with the metaphor of As the violinist pulls his bow across my heart, It shows a lot ...

Wow, NOW I know why I clicked on this! I like how you put down: I pledge allegiance to the flag of the United States of White America. I clearly ...

Sleep can be a melody, Rocking your sweet body. Sleep can be scary, Making you grow weary. Sleep can keep you awake, And seem like a big, black lake. Sleep ...

very good, i don't think i need to correct it at all, but i still love this. it goes very nicely, and nothing disrupted the flow. I like how you ...

well, this was a very good poem. it went very nicely for me. the flow was significant, but there a few things that you need to work on. you made ...

This poem was pretty short. Some things disrupted the flow. And I guess I will show you what happened: From the words of a monster i capitalize the I hate ...

There are some spelling mistakes. I think you would need to proofread your story a few times. You misspelled a lot of words. Maybe they were just typos, but you ...

I liked this poem, especially since it rhymed nicely, but there is only one thing i did not really like. I think it was a typo or something like that: ...