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Re: The scarlet mage
this was a pretty good story. i like how you put so many descriptive words, but there are a few things to point out to you. Also, the air carried ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: El Protetor.
wow. that's all i can muster for you, mamallama. This is the best story i have ever read!!!!!! great job. I love the descriptive words and the metaphors and similes. ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Book Ideas
Wow, I think I will help u with that: 1.Katrina 2. Seth and then, Melissa 3. 2400 or maybe The Tactician 4. Sun Tzu 5. Amanda 6. The Attack of ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: El Piggo and the Swine Flu. (For Pig Contest)
Hi, nice to meet you. I'm El Piggo. Yes, I sort of started the swine flu. That was my brother, but I want to start the story now, so BOO ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: The Ghost Above us.
great job. I liked how you organized things into different stanzas, but I guess there might be some typos, and you should probably proofread your work. For example: I’ve saw ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Ghost Train
Wow, that IS pretty good. But, I think I might have to agree with my friend, Caily, it's sort of awkward with no punctuation in the beginning. But that's okay ...
Jul 25, 2011 -
Re: Fear
this is a pretty good poem. i know you said it would be short, but i didn't expect just one stanza. I think it rhymed pretty well, but you should ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Fairview Academy RP [accepting]
Full Name: Emily (Baloo) Thuy- Linh Nguyen Thuy-Linh means Gentle Spirit in Vietnamese Age: 15 Appearance: Emily is an Asian-Australian girl(no offense!). She has long, black hair that is as ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Hero of the Night
hey Cailey!!! this was an awesome poem. I love poems that rhyme. i just luv this verse: There were no walls or roof, just snow; It was the North Pole, ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: When Will It End?
This poem, "When Will It End?" is very good. It shows the feeling in the author's view. I'd say this is a very good poem. It clearly shows the symptoms ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: I Did It For Them
The sea seemed a million miles away, I could only make out a sunshine ray. Papa and Ma told me to never go out, At that time, I had began ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: 'til vs. Till
'til apostrophe t-i-l. It's the contraction of UNTIL.
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: What's Your Favorite Summer Olympics Sport?
obviously swimming. It's cool to watch them dive in and do stuff. maybe its because i luv swimming. idk
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: Only who can prevent forest fires?
you didn't have SMOKEY THE BEAR!!!!!!!! "ONLY you CAN PREVENT WILDFIRES!!!!!!" :evil:
Jul 22, 2011 -
Re: What should I have for supper next week?
You should have put In-n-Out Burger.
Jul 22, 2011