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Re: I need help Believing....
Pretty good, but a few nitpicks My heart has suffered, Because of this thing. It can’t last any longer, It can’t take this horrible sting. The horrible sting....... I think ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Jack and Jill
this is pretty interesting.......corrupting a nursery rhyme... Anyways, I like how it rhymed and all,but I guess I don't really like it that much...... but that's my opinion! just don't ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Don't have one yet
i'm loving it, Cailey!!!! haha. But what I don't understand is the title. It doesn't relate to the story much. Still, you should've entered it in!!! It's such a good ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Grace
:O my jaw just dropped open on that one. Haha, it's still ooooopen!!!! anyways. I love that. That's all I can say GREAT JOB AND KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!! Lotsa love, ~Kat
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: A Robot with Emotion (Queen of the Robots Chapter 3)
Meeca ran freely across the tall grass, the tips tickling her face. Tolomeer smiled as little Meeca rushed into her arms. Meeca laughed as her mother swung her around. She ...
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: Longing to Be Free (Queen of the Robots Chapter 2)
sure! I love the first chapter anyways. So yes, I will review, ON REVIEW DAY!!!! :D ~Kat
Aug 27, 2011 -
Re: How to Create a Novel
i don't understand........ I'm adding my second chapter and it says that it is a new novel? i NEED HELP!!!
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: How to Create a Novel
how do i add a second. third. etc. chapters?
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Longing to Be Free (Queen of the Robots Chapter 2)
"Drink, Queen, Drink." a blank voice barked. Drinmeeca cringed as the cold water was poured down her throat. She instantly began coughing once the water had filled up her throat ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: If you're talking to the moon
Wow. I like that. That's all I can say :D. I like that. I'm really weird in some ways. Like talking to the moon and trees. But this one blows ...
Aug 26, 2011 -
Re: Held Captive (Queen of the Robots Chapter 1)
"Meeca! Meeca! Hurry dear!" "Mummy!" Meeca rushed to her mother's side. Her eyes grew wide with fear as the robots began surrounding them. She broke down, sobbing. It was the ...
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Lava's Volcano [Active]
and please, if u can, if you cannot do both, just do the second one please!! Thanks! ~Kat
Aug 25, 2011 -
Re: Run, 'Lissa, Run!
Run, 'Lissa, Run! Tell your father what has happened. Run, 'Lissa, Run! Put on your baby shoes. Run, 'Lissa, Run! Don't ever look back! Run, 'Lissa, Run! Run, 'Lissa, Run! ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Natural Dancing
Miriam skipped along the sidewalk to Hungrim Beach. She laughed to herself as people stared at the strange little girl. A man tried to approach her, but she slipped away ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: What Just HAPPENED?! (started)
Luna found it first, but after she flung the syringe into the woods, Abby ran to get it.
Aug 23, 2011