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Hello Abbie! Well, I thought this poem was pretty spectacular. I liked the description, but a few things kept nagging me. It's kinda insane I don't like the kinda, but ...

Hello there! First to say, THIS IS A GREAT BOOK!! I am totally loving it! I like everything you said, but there are a few nitpicks!!! A large group from ...

Sorry, but it seems a bit weird, don't you think? Nothing is really explained WHY she is a "Bone" Queen. It sounds like she is a ghost than a "Bone" ...

Hello! I thought this was a very touching story, hearing about one who conjures dreams. I like the description. It made me so happy. I love it how you explained ...

Hi! I thought this was a great story, but I think you need to work on your grammar. It kept nagging me, "Incorrect use of grammar!!!!" My name is Dee ...

Hello! I thought this was an awesome story!! There are a few nitpicks that I would love to point out, but I really do think this deserves around first place ...

This is an exciting poem. I have never read anything like this. But I don't like it that much. I suppose it was too short for me. I guess you ...

I can say it is a bit awkward how you enter in the I love you! stuff. Shout! Cry! Fall! But we’ll catch you, He and I. Drink your own ...

Hey Cailey!!! This is a pretty good poem. Can't say I hate it, so I love it!! Great job!! No nitpicks for this one... I love the ending!! GREAT JOB ...

Okay, critique!!! 1. Try using stanzas, because I had a hard time separating them by topic. 2. This seems more like a paragraph to me, try and make it shorter. ...

This is pretty good, but there are a few nitpicks: 1. Try putting these lines into stanzas, as it will help others understand better. 2. I agree, don't put so ...

Good Poem. But I can just say that you need to smooth it out a bit. Some words don't go with the flow. But what I don't understand is how ...

Can't say I hate it!!! I love poems such as these. I'm not a great poet myself, but I think of this poem, Daydream, as a fantastic role model for ...

I really like this poem. It's just the first stanza and the second line. it seems sort of awkward to have a really long line while the others are super ...

haha, this is a very funny short story. I can't say I hate it, so I like it!!! I like how you describe how the main character keeps hurting him/herself ...