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Re: Proluge - Two Worlds Collide
Once upon a time, there lived two girls, Susan and Ruan. These two girls were very different from each other, from their personality to where the grew up. Susan was ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: RUN! (accepting)
Name: Miriam Wilder Age: (1,369) Looks thirteen. Appearance: Background: Born in Runostawn, a place where you live forever once you find out your true name. Cannot remember anything other than ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: Run!
Hey guys! I'm advertising for Run! the newest and latest storybook. It's rated E for everyone and the language MUST BE mild. Mild as in words like shut up, stupid, ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: RUN! (accepting)
Here's the whole thing: Plot: People (must be people) wake up in a forest and meet a bunch of other people. Miriam, (me) a tour guide for the place called ...
Oct 10, 2011 -
Re: The Fiery Trees
Honestly, it isn't that good, but I like it. I absolutely LOVE the description. The title sort of fits with this piece, but I recommend a new one. I love ...
Oct 8, 2011 -
Re: I Went Back to Sleep
Hello! Haha, I know that you just felt like writing. So many things can inspire a young writer's mind from time to time. This poem's lines were a bit too ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: What Just HAPPENED?! (started)
Abigail I smiled at Drustan and thanked him. I clapped my hands cheerfully to bring the attention back to me. Everybody turned their heads to me. Woah, I didn't know ...
Sep 12, 2011 -
Re: Lipstick on His Collar
This is a really good poem. I like it. It just shows so much in so little words!!! That's why I like it so much. I hope you can write ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: The Hero's Decision
Hello there! I think this was a pretty good story. I loved it. It shows a guy with a little kid, not wanting to do anything serious... and how Gracie ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: One down, another barely standing.
Hello!!! Wow, this is a great story. I'm astonished at this piece of work you've managed to produce! It really does commemorate the 9/ 11 attack. I love it. It ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: The Twin Towers
"Renee! Hey, Renee! Wait up! I'm sorry!" a teenage boy cried out. Renee wheeled around on her red high-heels. She glared as the teenage boy ran towards her. She lifted ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: What Just HAPPENED?! (started)
sure go ahead. I watched as Amanda picked up the syringe. She was just about to inject it into herself when I took it and threw it into the woods. ...
Sep 5, 2011 -
Re: Desolate City
Hello there! I think this was a pretty good story!! I love it!! There is only one question I ask you to answer, Who was the speaker at the end ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Eternal Kiss
This was a good poem. I like how you started it. It caught me as striking. But the end...... The end didn't fit very well. It didn't have an awesome ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Why I Hate Painting My Nails
Hey There! I thought this was a pretty awesome story! I laughed at the ending. "And that's why I hate painting my nails." Amazing ending. Couldn't be better! I love ...
Sep 1, 2011
