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Re: Love Cha Bar
Percius "Yeeah, talkin' to ya, Rayah," he laughed, ordering some wine. He leaned over to stare at this new Brigid. "I like your hair too," he added.
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Re: Night Club
Dagger "Huh, yeah, sorta true, if you say so, al'ight. What's up with yah, homie?" Dagger pushed Charlie away. "Yah messin' with her, or whut?" Dagger was clearly drunk, just ...
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Re: Alfred Symon's Critic Clinic: Bringing Smiles since the 60's
Hai! I'm a pretty amateur writer, and gets most of my learning from Honors English classes. Sooo, Quick Critique for any or maybe all chapters of Queen of the Robots, ...
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Re: Character How-do-you-dos
Hi. I'm Meeca from Queen of the Robots. You could check out more on me by reading that interesting story of my life. I really quite like to live with ...
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Re: Night Club
Dagger "HehHeh," Dagger winked, grabbing Lusee by the waist and holding a dagger to her throat. "You sure you want her to die?" he laughed, starting to slice through her ...
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Re: Night Club
Dagger "Heey, we're not hear to have it, babe, we're fighting," Dagger shoved fourteen daggers into her breasts, "Remember?" he winked. Lusee She stared at Dagger "EEEEEEEEWWWWWWWW DAGGER, THAT IS ...
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Re: The Royal, Hotel and Bar
"Heh, yeah, don't mind about that, Addy. Not exactly human.. I come from different timelines and possible futures...You ever watch that show called Fringe? I mean, here in this century, ...
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Re: Night Club
Dagger "Heh, maybe we should..." Dagger trailed off, long daggers forming out of his back, like wings. His eyes turned bloodshot red and hit her with a few of his ...
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Re: Love Cha Bar
Percius "You seem much more drunk than me," Percius laughed, high and cute. "I don't very much like to talk with strangers, but it's all right if they're drunk, even ...
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Re: The Royal, Hotel and Bar
Nellie stared at this Charlee and Marty. "Hey, Charlee, it's gonna be fine, the cops aren't gonna get cha no more. Maybe you should find some hiding place before the ...
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Re: The Inn
Amysth Amysth stepped into the room, staring at all the weird people. She laughed to herself, seating herself in a corner and beckoning the man at the counter to come ...
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Re: Night Club
Dagger "Heh, I have quite a small reputation," he cackled. "DON'T YA DARE," Lusee shouted. "Anywho, you'd make it bigger," Dagger growled, unsheathing two overlarge swords. Dagger: Lusee "HEH, YOU ...
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Re: Love Cha Bar
"Oh, single? Heh.... You seem sort of drunk, I guess.... Um..... I guess a lot of people have heard of me at one point.... I tend to pop up in ...
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Re: Post your pics!
Heh..... I have seven characters here, feel free to review my books. ^.^ I'd be happy if you did, pleases. They're all mostly anime, by the way. (: Percius from ...
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Re: The Royal, Hotel and Bar
By the way, Ipod, the one who's playing Charlee, you really need to work on your grammar. Heh, (: It is pretty hard to separate what you're narrating and what ...
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