katiexnoway

WOW ! this was fan-tas-tic. i loved how everything just flowed together. --- And if it's space You need I'll fly to the moon Hoping to come back And rescue ...

WOW. this was very good. extremely entertaining. :D i loved this. You've got me very excited for part 2. you had a few spelled issues. for example : He didn't ...

It was like he was my heroine, soothing the aching I had within. I needed him like I needed a bullet in my head. this is way to cliche. and ...

This was fairly decent. The title is what originally caught my attention, but The story line seems to hold alot of potential. :) You have some spelling/tense issues. And you ...

Good job ! I thought that was a very enjoyable read ; You have some tense issues throughtout the peice Nothing terrible though. There are things like 'I checked my ...