katiexnoway

WOW ! this was fan-tas-tic. i loved how everything just flowed together. --- And if it's space You need I'll fly to the moon Hoping to come back And rescue ...

THIS IS NOT FINISHED ! but i dont want to spend more time on it if its not any good, so please tell me what you think (: I'm dead. ...

“Bye mom, love you!” the brunette said excitedly as she hugged her mother. “I’ll be home before 12. I promise.” “Bye honey,” Her mother smiled, hugging her daughter. “and Marie, ...

WOW. this was very good. extremely entertaining. :D i loved this. You've got me very excited for part 2. you had a few spelled issues. for example : He didn't ...

It was like he was my heroine, soothing the aching I had within. I needed him like I needed a bullet in my head. this is way to cliche. and ...

This was fairly decent. The title is what originally caught my attention, but The story line seems to hold alot of potential. :) You have some spelling/tense issues. And you ...

Good job ! I thought that was a very enjoyable read ; You have some tense issues throughtout the peice Nothing terrible though. There are things like 'I checked my ...

this was pretty good, but i would suggest more complex sentences.

The sleek black Mercedes sped down the highway, dodging in between other vehicles. Behind the wheel sat the thin frame of Jessica Hughes. Her fingers where tapping along with the ...