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Re: My Life, My Race
Hey MeherazulAzim ! This is a really well written poem. I like the patterns of rhyming although a few don't quite rhyme. "fire" and "massacre" sound sort of similar, but ...
Apr 16, 2016 -
Re: For Pepe
Wow this really made me think about my dead hamster. Anyway, it was fairly well written, I love the way you explained this part: "drowning him inside out" and "as ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: When I was young...
This really makes me want to be a kid again. This is insanely relatable, and well written as well! It feels like a deep thought from an adult who is ...
Apr 15, 2016 -
Re: The quiet in the loud
Wow this is really well written, especially for your first poem! I like the way you used oxymorons to portray the interal conflict of the speaker (that's how I interpreted ...
Apr 15, 2016
