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Re: Truth Be Sold(Prologue)
I love your style! I feel like this character has already ripped open my soul, taken my heart, and has sewn me back up. I mostly agree with Butterfly 18 ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: The Paladins of the Arcane, Chapter 1
This was wonderfully written! I can tell that you have a happy talent for words. One thing that confused me a bit was - who is the main character? The ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: A Dark Kind of Hope
Smile - thanks for pointing those out! I hadn't noticed!
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: A Dark Kind of Hope
Introduction: I walked into the room not knowing what to expect. I glanced down the hallway and gasped when I saw him through the window. He was outside, waiting for ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: I Love You
This is really great! I think that you should base a story off of something similar to this - it would be spectacular! I loved your phrasing and the way ...
Oct 5, 2011 -
Re: My Green Tea Latte - Chapter 1
I loved reading this! When you explained about how Rosy was the rich girl that a lot of people envied, but was still empty inside, it made me sad for ...
Oct 3, 2011
