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I really enjoyed the way you wrote this. I think it could have been longer too but it's interesting to me. I will continue to read more when time allows. ...

Thanks! I do need to check the grammar and I will add some more to it. I didn't think about starting it back in Kentucky. Thanks again!

I made sure all the letters in the story were indented and I'm going to italicize them as well. It's easier for me if they're italic too so for future ...

Thanks! This helps! WHen I write, I forget to look at the tenses and keep them all present. I will work on that today. Thanks I'm glad you like it!

You can't help but keep reading this! Very catchy opening! It's not every day death is strolling by your mailbox and making conversations. lol. Definately nice to have death with ...

This is a nice poem. Keep up the good work. It's very descriptive and has a nice flow. I think it's kind of sad, because it deals with death and ...

This is a nice song! I only wish I could listen to it on the radio too! LOL

Okay, I've posted it in 3 sections for those whom it's easier to have online and read in sections. I have done all the editing suggested by Jessa even if ...

PART 3: “That sounds good.” They went downstairs and Grace told her mom where they were headed. Her mom gives Jared a wink and he waves bye. They eat some ...

PART 2: Grace folded the letter up and put it in her purse. Jared finished eating while Grace quickly pulled out a piece of paper and began writing. I love ...

I'm posting the edited version thanks to Jessa :) below. It's not attached, just posted. I hope it posts right. I will post it in three sections much like I ...

bugbug, I reposted because someone DID notice. I posted as attachements because 1 - I can. 2 - I didn't feel like spending hours to seperate the paragrahs. When I ...

Have you ever read the book series by Lisa McMann Wake, Fade, and Gone. Very nice series. This girl can see others' dreams. If not, it's pretty good reading!

IF you help me review, please let me know what page you refer to so when I go to fix the problems it'll be easier to find since the short ...

Very precise and to the point. I really enjoyed it. Short and "sweet?" lol. Good job. I can visualize this happening too. Great job! I want to see more of ...