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Thanks for the review @alanafiredancer! It was my first time writing something like that so I'm glad you've taken that into account. Hopefully my second time will be a lot ...

Thanks for your comments - as I said before, I found this from a very young part of my life and the end had me in hysterics. It's so serious ...

Thanks for reading my work; I've taken all your points down and might just edit this and repost it. On the matter of psychology, I tried to go for something ...

Thanks for taking the time to read my work. I've taken all your points into consideration. The only thing I would say is that I wrote this for a competition ...

To me, it seems like this really was written out of a lot of anger, and maybe that's why the poem isn't that polished. But that very effect right there ...

@StoryWeaver - thank you for the analysis of my chapter. However, I would say that this novel ha already been written? (If you check, I've uploaded the prologue if you ...