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Re: Humanity
I think this poem was pretty good! However, it did have some downsides I didn't really connect too much with the poem it could use something to spice it up. ...
Nov 22, 2016 -
Re: Say I Never Mattered
Wow.....all I can say about this piece is wow. It was just truly magnificent I did notice a couple of grammar mistakes. Yet, it was still incredible I loved the ...
Nov 22, 2016 -
Re: Visions ; Introduction + Chapter One [PT1]
This story was phenomenal, normally I don't usually read these types of genre stories but this work was incredible! It was a perfect mix of mystery and action! However, the ...
Nov 22, 2016 -
Re: Paradise on Earth
I think this story was very interesting. But, I feel as if the message could have been more strong. Maybe find a way to show moral of the story without ...
Nov 19, 2016
