kaityjay

I close my eyes to drown in my pain. I feel alone. I feel scared. No on will stop, No one cares to hear. This is toto much for me ...

Thanks for the help guys. I will restructure my grammer or whatever..I get lazy. It was something i jotted down because my boyfriend has been having a hard time with ...

ok..its been a while. Heres a new one. When you're at the top, With nothing to lose.. Dont let your gaurd down, You'll just get used. Dont give up Through ...

uuummm..... ? are you talking about my comment or my poem?

dang!! i said it earlier on my thing...but i'll say it again :0 haha i LOVE you! ew gross not that way..hehe but forreal... you seem like a really good ...

haha thanks everybody :) yeah you guys pretty much said what i sucks :) hahaha no m feelings arent hurt!lol monki: i love you :) hehe i dont kno you ...

Im hurt, You've hurt me again. Not once, but twice. I dont even want to call you my friend. I fell just like a fool I've fallen for your lies ...

aww thanks you guys :) i will DEFINITELY capatalize my "freaking I's" haha! sorry i tend to get lazy and forget about all that stuff... anywho ...thanks for all the ...

haaay! haha (: you left a review on MY poem so ill leave one on YOURS (: hmm...anywho! seems like a really good poem. ok so you said to be ...

wow this is really good! i dont think i have aything that i want changed... unless maybe making the suspense last a little longer. all in all, its very good. ...

[b] Blood. I fell to the ground. paralyzed by the pain. can't anyone help me? I turn to my right, a dark hallway... I turn to my left, a dark ...