jwritermonroe

Well Lara stole the words right out if my mouth. The story is great and kept me on the edge of my seat and I understood every word of it ...

I like the idea its very interesting but you need to get a character profile and a rough draft first this it isn't really my place to criticize you but ...

Thanks for the help since I'm not to good with writing English I kinda expected these comments. But I hope to get better in writing so I can write a ...

Hello everyone this is a story that I made in the sixth grade and tried revising it this is an excerpt of the un-revised version and after a couple a ...