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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sonnet!

    thaaanks! i've written an old one. you might want to see it. :)

    Aug 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sonnet!

    aww thanks for the positive response! but im far from expert haha

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sonnet!

    thanks for this helpful review! i meant for "i love thee" to be repeated because, to me, saying it once is simply never enough. you might not ever be able ...

    Aug 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sonnet!

    I used "I love thee", why? Because, in my heart and mind, I already got married to my girl when we exchanged those words for the first time. :) No ...

    Aug 24, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Sonnet!

    Thanks for the warm response and your suggestion! :) By the way, on the 9th line, I overlooked an error. Haha I forgot to type in the word "seer". Thanks ...

    Jun 12, 2012


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