justme~

Sooooo yes. I know it's really not great, but don't be too mean about it. hahaha :wink: I'm not letting you go, you've been slipping through my fingers this whole ...

Wow!! I absolutely love this!! oh my gosh!! It's really beautiful. I love the part that says "You think that I am callous, Heartless, cruel and cold. But I do ...

Thanks=]] glad you liked it. Hehe. Yeah I'm weird like that too, it annoys me if the same word is used too much. I only used 'tears' twice though. Maybe ...

I think this is really interesting=] Very cool. I think it has a nice flow. The part that says "Death approaches closer For a friend of mine But which one? ...

Hmm. I really like it=) It's really deep. And I likey your style. I think that Ben is quite wrong because I really understood and felt what you wrote and ...

it's sooo beatiful!! Definitely one of my absolute favorites of yours! You're so good at this!!!!!!!!! hehe there were some spelling that could be corrected and heck I don't really ...

I LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's really awesome!!! I love the last part!!!! And I love God so much, so that part was really really good! =]] It's cool, even though it's ...

This is so cool! It totally reminds of summer!! I really like the part that says "slowly the sun surrenders to a diamond studded sky." and also the whole ending ...

and about the last line, I'm not sure why I picked the word dissolve, but it just kind of popped into my head, ya know? lol.

Thanks for reading and reviewing! I know I did make some mistakes in grammar, and even spelling, sorry about that! Also, I did comment on other peoples poems, but then ...

I hate to see you in pain, but how much more can I take? If you only knew, all the time I wasted, crying for you. Yet you don't care, ...

That's very cool. Sounds like something I would try to write but couldn't. hehe. I like it though. It's annoying when your head gets all stuffed up and you can't ...

Wow, I love it! :] It's very sweet.