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  • Other Poetry Re: Dear Nate,

    Thank you so much, Nate!

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Soul Mate

    This is a very nice poem you have here! I absolutely love the last line. It just really makes the poem. At first, I thought your flow was a bit ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Luna

    I love your writing style! This is very well written. Poems like these make me eager to read the last line, eager for the last revelation. And this satisified me! ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I wish

    I can relate very very well. So first off, excellent job in explaining everything will such simplicity that I could relate. ;) Second off, I love the second stanza of ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Sin

    Wowzers! I haven't read a poem this willing to talk about sin. And it is terrific! Very emotional without angrily pointing fingers to people. You put yourself in there. Like ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: an aestival whisper

    Hey. I just wanted to say. You amaze me. That is all.

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: bloated bites

    Hey there. This is over my head but I can still admire its beauty. You are a truly talented writer. I'm not sure if this is what you were going ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Teddy Bear and His Used Heart

    Well I absolutely hate it when someone TELLS you to cut something out so I won't do that. Especially because I don't want you to cut anything out or tell ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Doll is Waiting

    The imagery was great but I also was confused about the message. But I'm confused about a lot of things so I wouldn't take it personal. ;) I would usually ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: **Haven't really thought of a title**

    I can't tell you how much I love this! I really really really love it! It flows perfectly, amazingly, and seems effortless. I can completely relate. I really wish I ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Bumblebee's Journey

    Very cute poem you have here. I really like it. I could picture everything. And it has great flow. I like how the last stanza is only two lines. It ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Gummy Worms

    Awww, this is really sweet! And I agree, the form of the poem is different but it fits. Great job.

    Jun 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Adolescent Anguish

    This is a really good poem. I like the format and it flows very nicely. And I could also relate. I think every young writer can relate to this in ...

    Jun 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: us

    I really like it. I can relate very well. It's nice and simple and makes a point. Good job.

    Jun 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The robin

    Wow! This is awesome! It's really easy to read and keep reading especially. I love it. It's very classy but also sounds very youthful, if that makes sense. I really ...

    Jun 15, 2011


A ruler leads by example, not force.
— Sun Tzu