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Re: Dear Nate,
Thank you so much, Nate!
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: My Soul Mate
This is a very nice poem you have here! I absolutely love the last line. It just really makes the poem. At first, I thought your flow was a bit ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Luna
I love your writing style! This is very well written. Poems like these make me eager to read the last line, eager for the last revelation. And this satisified me! ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: I wish
I can relate very very well. So first off, excellent job in explaining everything will such simplicity that I could relate. ;) Second off, I love the second stanza of ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Sin
Wowzers! I haven't read a poem this willing to talk about sin. And it is terrific! Very emotional without angrily pointing fingers to people. You put yourself in there. Like ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: an aestival whisper
Hey. I just wanted to say. You amaze me. That is all.
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: bloated bites
Hey there. This is over my head but I can still admire its beauty. You are a truly talented writer. I'm not sure if this is what you were going ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Teddy Bear and His Used Heart
Well I absolutely hate it when someone TELLS you to cut something out so I won't do that. Especially because I don't want you to cut anything out or tell ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: The Doll is Waiting
The imagery was great but I also was confused about the message. But I'm confused about a lot of things so I wouldn't take it personal. ;) I would usually ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: **Haven't really thought of a title**
I can't tell you how much I love this! I really really really love it! It flows perfectly, amazingly, and seems effortless. I can completely relate. I really wish I ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Bumblebee's Journey
Very cute poem you have here. I really like it. I could picture everything. And it has great flow. I like how the last stanza is only two lines. It ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Gummy Worms
Awww, this is really sweet! And I agree, the form of the poem is different but it fits. Great job.
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: Adolescent Anguish
This is a really good poem. I like the format and it flows very nicely. And I could also relate. I think every young writer can relate to this in ...
Jun 18, 2011 -
Re: us
I really like it. I can relate very well. It's nice and simple and makes a point. Good job.
Jun 17, 2011 -
Re: The robin
Wow! This is awesome! It's really easy to read and keep reading especially. I love it. It's very classy but also sounds very youthful, if that makes sense. I really ...
Jun 15, 2011
