justin5676

Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I say I hate you,
It kind of seems like you added extra words that you didn't need just to make the poem rhyme. Don't let rhyming get in the way of your writing. This ...
May 28, 2008
Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Warrior Princess
I liked this. I liked how you were short and to the point, and didn't drag out the whole poem with unneeded words and information just to make it rhyme, ...
May 28, 2008

So, please, oh please, we beg, we pray, go throw your TV set away, and in its place you can install a lovely bookcase on the wall.
— Roald Dahl