justin5676

I really liked this story. I'm usually not a fan of these types of stories, but I enjoyed this one. There were a few grammatical and punctuational errors, though. Here ...

Hey, thanks A LOT for reviewing my story. You are the only one (so far) to do so, and I appreciate it. One problem, though. I don't have MS word, ...

Just fixed the spacing and got the number of reviews I should have. Tell me what you think, first finished piece of writing.

Love is a body, perfect like a treat. ^Uhm, bodies may be perfect sometiems, but are all treats perfect? "Perfect like a treat" Treats aren't described as perfect. Anyways, I ...

To me, it just didn't make sense. What about love being harsh and kind will make you blind? Your third line in each of the three poems has nothing to ...

The mood of the poem definitely shows in this poem. However, there are many grammatical and punctuational errors. This was done a while ago (I'm not too sure, since I ...

It kind of seems like you added extra words that you didn't need just to make the poem rhyme. Don't let rhyming get in the way of your writing. This ...

I liked this. I liked how you were short and to the point, and didn't drag out the whole poem with unneeded words and information just to make it rhyme, ...

Hey guys, just joined this site =]. Anyways, I'm 15, and I just started to write. Here is something that I put together in about 2-3 hours. I let the ...