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Re: Castle on a Hill-Chapter 1
Wow! I really like it. Your vocabulary is awesome, but I think you can put it to even better use. You got the point across of what they were doing ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: It's Okay
This was great! The begining, I thought, was a bit unprofessional, but the more I read, the better it got. I really liked it and the fact that you wrote ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: True Love
It's very cute, and I really like the messege. The only thing I have to say is: It's doesn't quite flow right. If you know what I mean. I see ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: The Poisonous Phone
It's good story, but it moved quite fast. Maybe just slow it down a bit and explain some things like setting, the envirnment, what they looked like. I understand it's ...
Sep 17, 2011 -
Re: My Green Tea Latte - Chapter 1
I really liked it! You did a wonderful job of describing the envinorment. It's also a very relatable story, I understand what she's going through. Anyways, can't wait to read ...
Sep 17, 2011