justcallmefade

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Wow! I really like it. Your vocabulary is awesome, but I think you can put it to even better use. You got the point across of what they were doing ...

This was great! The begining, I thought, was a bit unprofessional, but the more I read, the better it got. I really liked it and the fact that you wrote ...

This very sweet, but I feel like it's a bit generic. Alomst like I've heard it before. But overall, I really like it, very cute.

It's very cute, and I really like the messege. The only thing I have to say is: It's doesn't quite flow right. If you know what I mean. I see ...

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It's good story, but it moved quite fast. Maybe just slow it down a bit and explain some things like setting, the envirnment, what they looked like. I understand it's ...

I really liked it! You did a wonderful job of describing the envinorment. It's also a very relatable story, I understand what she's going through. Anyways, can't wait to read ...

I was just looking for somewhere where I could share stories, so I goggled "Young Writers Website" and here I am :)

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