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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: And isn't that unfair

    I absolutely adore this piece. It is gorgeously written, with amazing imagery and easy flow. I relate to it a lot, because I met the love of my life when ...

    Jan 22, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Ode of the Universe

    This is gorgeous. It flows beautifully and you can almost see the sky dancing and hear it's song through your poem. The only thing I want to point out is ...

    Jan 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: In Memory

    This is really good! It's emotional and descriptive, you'll be able to connect with a lot of readers this way! Only thing I would like to point out to you ...

    Jan 22, 2016


It had a perfectly round door like a porthole, painted green, with a shiny yellow brass knob in the exact middle. The door opened on to a tube-shaped hall like a tunnel: a very comfortable tunnel without smoke, with panelled walls, and floors tiled and carpeted, provided with polished chairs, and lots and lots of pegs for hats and coats—the hobbit was fond of visitors. The tunnel wound on and on, going fairly but not quite straight into the side of the hill —The Hill, as all the people for many miles round called it—and many little round doors opened out of it, first on one side and then on another.
— JRR Tolkien