july4ruby

hi! I guess I am not good at reviewing but I'll still try.I liked the topic.I agree with nox that you should change the title.The word were a little hard ...

hi! I simply loved the poem! The main idea was could use a nice rhyming scheme the other small mistakes were pointed out by the others so I just want ...

Hi! I really liked the poem :)The subject is great.there are a few little mistakes(if you don't mind).I felt that 'thee' was a little odd.secondly the rhyming scheme was a ...

I like the pattern of the poem.I guess I can see a vague pattern.why not try to make the subject more precise.Still I liked it.Keep up the good work.:p

Pay heed to this advice, strange traveler and venture not in there, for there, ye will find darkness and dangers everywhere. I these caves yonder thou will find strange evils ...

Hi grin! Thanx for the review . Your language is nice. I like the old English style, it really suits the story, but the rhyming isn't necessary. Usually you'll have ...

Thanx for the review dreamer.yes,it was supposed to be thou.I just brought wordsworth's poems from the library and I thought what if these disney princesses were in wordsworth's time.Then these ...

Come hither,oh ye prince charming where art thou lost? thy maiden fair awaits thy coming for thee,she misses most thy sweet face she longs to see in her hands a ...

Thanks for the reviews.I really appreciate any comments because I need them!I know the last line of the second stanza is a little out of place.The problem is I couldn't ...

I liked your poem very much.I feel I can relate to what you wrote.I can't judge you the way others do because I have just started writing poetry myself and ...

I walk upon the icy lanes enveloped in dense snow and see the trees so white and bare their branches hanging low No soul do I find in sight to ...

Name:Emily Rosewood Age:13 Gender:female House:Hufflepuff personality:Usually very joyful and absentminded she is loyal and true to her friends.She sometimes has a hard time making new friends.She fee

I liked the poem very much.The wording is really nice.I guess I don't know much about the details of writing poems because I am a very inexperienced writer but overall ...

A new year has begun another new day another rising sun Many new thoughts many new hopes this coming year has brought Coming to new conclusions after the past year ...

What have you done to my beautiful world? What has happened to the rising sun? Why have you crushed my beautiful dream? What has happened to the sparkling streams? Where ...