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I Absolutely Love it! Probably because I couldn't make sense of it :) Well the main idea wasn't understandable and to me it was just random and bizarre collection of ...

Nice work! I liked the was short and interesting.I liked the part about the constant battle with cold but when you think of cold you could add so much detail.The ...

Hi! This was hilarious! This is the first Harry Potter / Twilight parody I have read and I loved it! I don't think I need to mention the mistakes , ...

Hey! This poem was amazing! I was forced to reply to was beautiful from beginning to end.The language was simple but the meaning was so deep and elaborate.I can't criticize ...

Girl,and I am already one! Yay! But girls are definitely better. would you rather watch T.V or read books. (I know what the answer is going to be)

8/10 nice! I like it.

Granted, but now you're stupid and everyone hates you for not being smart. I wish I could stop time whenever I want.

I'm beginning; Like the dawn, that illuminates every corner, and brightens the world. Like the candle that gives hope, and lightens the way. Like the first cackle of a newborn ...

I HATE loud noises.Whenever a person yells,screams or calls for me I literally jump from my seat.

"You're mad,bonkers.But let me tell you a secret, all the best people are"..... Alice in wonderland

Now it's over,my dear and there are many questions I would have asked but now it's too late To tell you the truth it wasn't so hard but what really ...

Hi, I think it's a really good poem especially if its a first attempt.I love your imagery but the first stanza still lacks the flow that is more prominent in ...

Hi, This is a real amazing piece of work.It's strangely true by the way.I had so much fun reading it that I could really imagine a little kid in shorts ...

Hey, I like the word and the emotions are really good but I agree with lindsay it is a bit abstract.try and give it a central theme and maybe change ...

Hey! I really like the idea and I know that most of us feel the same way but the truth is the critics are just trying to help you.Now the ...