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Re: Prologue ~ Burned
Hello! I very much enjoyed this. It's an interesting, yet difficult topic to write about without personal experience, I'm sure. I'm assuming this hasn't actually happened to you before, so ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: The Purple Paperclip Part 1
Hello! Ok, right off I am going to say- You are very good at developing your characters. In my opinion, at least, I felt like I knew them! You have ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Not Far From Home
For being so short, I found it very good. Perhaps an 8 out of 10. It was a very interesting subject, and it played out nicely. The mood was dark ...
Mar 14, 2009
