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Re: Spring is in the Air
Excellent pictures! The sunset was gorgeous! I love spring, so I of course enjoyed these very much! One thing, the second picture: it would look much more striking if you ...
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Re: Horse
Hey there! Very nice job! I envy those that have artistic ability, quite frankly, I could not draw a recognizable form if my life depended on it. :D Anyway, very ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Viva La Vida: Chapter IV
Again, did my best with the formatting. And I'm reviewing 2 more pieces. Enjoy. "Wait a second, Sergey." A man in long trench coat spoke up in a gravelly voice. ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Viva La Vida: Chapter III
Thanks so much!!! I will be sure to remember that!!!!
Mar 17, 2009 -
Re: Viva La Vida: Chapter III
Despite what my profile reads I have made sure to review two more pieces before submitting this, somehow my computer screwed it up. But I'm clear, I promise. Enjoy! and ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Pictures
Hello! Nice pictures! Photography has recently become a passion of mine, so I always like to see what my peers can come up with! Well, I very much like the ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Viva La Vida: Chapter II
CHAPTER II The dice rolled down the smooth tabletop. Double fives. Jade cast a look in the martini-man's direction and was met with a blank stare. "Oh, I see," Jade ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Around Town
These photos were excellent!! I very much enjoyed seeing a bit of your town, it seems very lively. I love how you really captured the charm of it and used ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Prologue ~ Burned
Hello! I very much enjoyed this. It's an interesting, yet difficult topic to write about without personal experience, I'm sure. I'm assuming this hasn't actually happened to you before, so ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Viva LA Vida: Chapter I
Thanks so much! I will take that into consideration in my writing!!
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Viva LA Vida: Chapter I
WORD TO THE WISE (READERS): Hello! WARNING: This piece may cause you to write a lengthy review of my grammar, which is not excellent, I am sorry to say! I ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: The Purple Paperclip Part 1
Hello! Ok, right off I am going to say- You are very good at developing your characters. In my opinion, at least, I felt like I knew them! You have ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Not Far From Home
For being so short, I found it very good. Perhaps an 8 out of 10. It was a very interesting subject, and it played out nicely. The mood was dark ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Twilight Fan Fiction
I really liked it! I agree with one of the other reviewers on how you did an exceptional job imitating the style of Twilight. To me, it was like reading ...
Mar 14, 2009
