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I can assure you that they are up in my local library and village notice board. :D However i would like to be able to give more immediate information. How ...

1 day theres lyk this thin ye I lyk threw lyk this lyk thing it was lyk sumfin that like began with a lyk 1 of those b things ye ...

Thank you for your thoughts. It was an old piece of work and it made me think. I will work on it. Thanks again Jtk xx

Love is selfless ---> somthing to argue over ...

... desire, emotion, intense, over-whelming, devotion, amazing, un-true... many more ...

Mixed feelings about this. I can't think of anything to evolve from this. I hope you can create something from this. Sorry, but I don't feel anything flying off the ...

Currently reading Junk by Melvin Burgess. Has anybody else read this?

Nice. I hope you will continue this! An enjoyable brief glimpse of what is to come.

Hi Rebecca! I used to write mainly poetry. Now i drift in between all different types of writing. :D

Hiya --- new member here! Wahoo, party everybody!

Came across this poem whilst browsing through old work. Wondering if anything could be made of it... Emotions you feel are something But don't feel so bad You have a ...

A better new version, i enjoyed reading it! If i were you, i would still review a more stable rhythm. :) Jtk

This could be quite a nice piece, but, please be serious.

You have a really good basic idea there. I did struggle to find a rhythm, probably due to the in-forced 'over-the-top' rhyming. I like the basis.