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Re: Escape to Fate - Part Two (link to part one below)
Wow thank you so much for all of your critical comments! You showed me a lot of things I can improve on! Thank you so much! And i'm happy you ...
Jul 29, 2011 -
Re: Escape To Fate - Part One
Yes I know I am trying to work out my mistakes :) And thank you!!! Glad it was alright! :D
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Escape To Fate - Part One
Thank you both for pointing out all of my typos and grammar mistakes! I will break it up into smaller paragraphs and fix those mistakes I made. Thank you both ...
Jul 1, 2011
