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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Escape to Fate - Part Two (link to part one below)

    Wow thank you so much for all of your critical comments! You showed me a lot of things I can improve on! Thank you so much! And i'm happy you ...

    Jul 29, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Escape To Fate - Part One

    Yes I know I am trying to work out my mistakes :) And thank you!!! Glad it was alright! :D

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Escape To Fate - Part One

    Thank you both for pointing out all of my typos and grammar mistakes! I will break it up into smaller paragraphs and fix those mistakes I made. Thank you both ...

    Jul 1, 2011


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