jrauthorintraining

Wow thank you so much for all of your critical comments! You showed me a lot of things I can improve on! Thank you so much! And i'm happy you ...

/\ /\ this is the link to part one if you have not read it yet! Please help me out and rate if possible! The bright lights blinded me as ...

Oh my goodness I am so sorry. I can't imagine how hard it must be. You two are both so young?! I will pray for the both of you

Yes I know I am trying to work out my mistakes :) And thank you!!! Glad it was alright! :D

Thank you both for pointing out all of my typos and grammar mistakes! I will break it up into smaller paragraphs and fix those mistakes I made. Thank you both ...

Thanks for the link! It will really help!!! And yes i know its strange to listen to "The Super Mario Galaxy Orchestra" but I assure you it works for us ...

I do the same thing! I try to match the mood of my story with the music when writing the climax. The story i'm writing right now is called "Escape ...

OH AND THE TITLE IS "ESCAPE TO FATE - PART ONE" ok!!

Ok so I just posted the first part of my story in the "Writers Corner" forum! SO GO CHECK IT OUT!! Please give me some reviews and note that this ...

*THIS IS THE FIRST TIME I HAVE EVER POSTED ANY OF MY WORK ON HERE SO PLEASE GIVE ME SOME REVIEWS!* thanks!

And they have adult classes so I think there is no age limit for the adult class?????? Not sure about that one!

Umm well not all of it is based on age but on experience but you do have to be a certain age for each group of competing, plus they might ...

I know i'm sorry I was trying to avoid doing that but there is still a twist at the end that has not been revealed :)

Im trying not give away too much but yes the main character ( Skyler ) falls in love with the tour guide. Yes her "parents" are heartless and her biological ...

Guess you'll have to read and find out! :DDD