jpenny

"Why do fools fall in love?", is a question I've always wondered. Up until now, in that department I've always blundered. But at the moment things are different, the time's ...

I get what you're saying. It does look a lot better than it did. Thanx

I stand at the gates. They shine brighter than the stars in the heavens. They open before me and I slowly step in, unsure of what will happen. The bright ...

I love how your poem is written. It's more like a really short story rather than a poem. but I really like the line, "if i had to describe that ...

I agree that the last line didn't quite go with the rest of the poem. I also think that the pace wasn't too fast it was perfect for what you ...

Hey ya'll, I'm Jennifer or you can call me jpenny (doesn't matter.) I'm 14 and I loooooove writing anywhere about anything. I'm new and stuff, so I'm kinda excited/nervous at ...