jpen510
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Ok, so here's my attempt at revision. I took into account all the comments from everyone on here and some from outside YWS, so those are all included in here. ...May 13, 2010 -
The sun sweeps onto the porch where I sit and the wind blows gently, mixing the smell of outside with the smell of baking cookies. I sigh with contentment. My ...Nov 1, 2010 -
Julie picks her head up off my chest. “What are we doing Sammy?” Sunlight streams through the window, it’s noon. “Hey Sammy, order up!” Raul yelled at me passing by ...Nov 1, 2010
