jothelioness

Is this a complete piece? I'm left wondering what the point of the story was. About a little girl falling hitting her head? Who was this little girl, what was ...

The mane and tail are full out fail, so if anyone knows of a good tutorial or has tips to share, please do! A request from someone on a roleplay ...

Thank you. You're too kind! I've got a lot of room to improve, but I feel like I'm kind of heading in the right direction!

Thank you!

Wow, thank you for your great advice! By backgrounds, I am thinking you mean you want actual objects/landscaping for a change? Or perhaps I need to suggest the rest of ...

Everyone else was doing it, so... ;) Tell me what you (honestly) think and what I can improve on! oops! have to put links to my DA because I couldn't ...

I liked this story. The thought of being blind to me is an absolute horror, and I can really understand how he wants to know what colors look like. It ...

I'm glad you both liked it! Your comments mean alot to me. :)

Feeling inspired after the encouraging replies I received from "Purple". So, keep in mind that I am a very early beginner writer... :O Just a short little story from the ...

Thanks to all of you! I'll take these and probably spiff this up a little bit. ;) As far as not being a writer goes... Well, I have never written ...

Perhaps PURPLE for me? (sorry for no spiffy link. ): )

Oh my gosh, my spelling/grammar is terrible. I'm really bad about being able to find these mistakes, and I don't have a proper word editor. Thanks for that, though. I ...

Okay, so, keep in mind I'm not a writer. I just had a sudden urge to try this. Crits are highly encouraged! Prompt taken from the 100 short story contest ...

Q: What's your full name and what is it's meaning? Ashley Raquel Parkston Q: Where is your favorite place and what memories made it that certain place? My bed, it's ...

One thing I would mention to you is to remember that if her fathers wants to find her, he can do it because she has the credit card. He can ...