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A CORRUPT LAND In the midst of corruption, Where there seems to be no perfection, Where the rich rule the poor, And the hungry feed on oppression. What shall they ...

as a matter of fact, am not concerned on if he is truely innocent or not,the fact remains that his defence were able to convince the jury that he is ...

heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey take it real cool cos you are really killing me with this great stuff. am surely impressed,as a matter of fact i thought u were speaking to me. keep ...

hey..............nice work in there,keep it up!

wooooooooooooooooow i must confess i really liked that piece of work. its eally great....especially the rhymes

How long shall you judge unjustly, And accept the persons of the wicked? Defend the poor and needy, Take them out of oppression. They know not, Neither do they understand. ...

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wow! that was really nice rachael....i really liked the repitition of ''its so frightening''. cool job lady...keep it up.

i was a bit surrised with the emergence of the lats line although i still liked the poem.

i really liked the idea but think u have to watch ur caitalization kee it u.

He is as the cluster of camphire as the rows of jewels, as a chain of gold, He is her beloved She is as the fountain of gardens as a ...

its cool....wat else can i say? ee the good work going.

In the midst of corruption Where there seems to be no perfection Where the rich riles the poor And the hungry feed on opression What shall they gain, In greed ...

may be u should check ur spellings...they are mistaken especially in verse 2. its good work any way. i like it.

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