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aaagghhhhh, I absolutely love this piece (it kind of epitomizes me). Probably my favorite of all of your pieces! :D It conveys human independence and the fear of relying on ...

The icy sky of frozen contemplation lingered overhead As the sands of time reversed their downward journey. The horizon developed clouds of threatening violence, And I, I just sat there, ...

As I've told you before, I'm in love with this piece! :D All of it seemed to come from a vault of emotion buried deep within you and nothing seemed ...

I found this piece to be absolutely amazing! I will agree that I would like to see a tad more detail, however that's not to take anything away from the ...

Absolutely wonderful piece! It may sound stupid to say so, but it sort of had a "Pride and Prejudice"/ "Wuthering Heights" feel to it (which is why I loved it ...

Had you not said so, I never would have guessed that this was someone's first attempt at writing poetry. It was simply beautiful! I, personally, had no problem with the ...

Loved the construction of the poem (beginning and ending with the ocean). I also enjoyed your use of French. Overall, I found this poem to be heartwarming and beautiful, and ...

I know! You just need to move to Texas already!

I don't know that I've ever had the pleasure of reading a poem that flowed with such clarity and precision before. T'was very concise, and I really appreciated that. Your ...

You are a fantastic writer! But on the same token, I do agree with MeanMrMustard. I'd love to see more substance added to the poem. That in conjunction with your ...

Defying the nature of time, Disregarding initial conditions. Thoughts flit into And out of existence In infinitely Existent and Nonexistent ways. Your universe: Just as chaotic, But it makes sense, ...

Beautiful writing! I love how you delved so deeply into the character, and the diary was magnificent. I'm a huge Potter fan, and this was definitley a pleasing piece :D ...

You're such a talented writer! I loved the dark tint of this poem; it was something that I could really connect with. :D

:D Beautiful piece of poetry! I love how it encompassed humanity as a whole. "I found a heart and proceeded to lose it. I kissed a mouth but forgot whose ...

Great poem! :D I think it really captures the beauty of being alone and the appreciation of nature. However, I did find some of the sentences to be a bit ...