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Dreams tumbled downward In an endless pitfall of time, Down upon a crowd of empty minds, Filling the vacuum with purpose Commensurate to the will of the soldier. In between ...

A gentle breeze rustled through the leaves of tranquility as the last dying rays of sunlight disappeared over the horizon. Songs of the nightingales drifted softly through the darkening air, ...

The very first thing that I noticed that bothered me was in the first line: "... what we could of had." You were looking for could hace or could've. I ...

This was an enjoyable poem to read. I enjoyed your repetition and emphasis on dreams, but I will agree that the structure was a little confusing. Other than that, I ...

Let me start by saying that this poem really was good, so don't let anything that I mention in this comment mitigate that fact. Okay, well, one thing that kind ...

Night confronted her adversary, Intrepid, A face of darkness dancing among the stars that brightened it. There he stood, Undaunted, Head blazing with the fires of Hell. Commencing words slithered ...

Now this is simply amazing! I can't tell you how much I loved it! :D The vocabulary was fantastic, the structure was amazing, and I fell madly in love with ...

Good piece. It summarized the series very well, and I think this would be a good crash course for those newbies to the world of Harry Potter. So, congratulations on ...

This was a good poem. Be careful to avoid singular conjugation of verbs involving more than one thing, though. Other than that, I found nothing too in need of correction. ...

Through the bars of posterity, He watched The shallow movements of guardianship, Watched the eternal dance of providence, Fascinated with the accompaniment of the unexpected with the mundane: The pred

Excellent poem. It has a lot of depth to it, and that's something that I really appreciate. I loved the misery that was conveyed at the duties of a mother/ ...

I loved this piece! It had a very Kate Chopin- Awakening feel to it, and seeing as that is one of my favorite pieces of literature, you can guess just ...

This was a good poem, although it seemed a tad bit choppy. Otherwise, I loved it. ;D I absolutely love reading Harry Potter as I have grown up with it ...

Well, I'll agree that writing is something you can do right! One of many by the sound of it! I can't describe how much I enjoyed reading this poem, as ...

Fists pounded on the door of peril, Demanding entrance to a world of foreign precariousness. Ignorant avidity paved the way to disclosure, Demolishing a wall of protection, The aegis meant ...