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  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Dramatic Re: It's Been Fun, Percy

    Oh my gods too many feels. I love this! The references are slotted in really well, and I'm sure it relates to what every PJO/HoO fan feels right now. The ...

    Oct 9, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: The Dragon King Prequel/Prologue (Part One)

    I loved this. The description was vivid and crystal clear, and the story itself was also top notch. Keep writing!

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Alpha - Prologue

    Thanks! Don't worry about the dupes, and I agree with you, I did use too many similes in that paragraph.

    Sep 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Alpha - Prologue

    Thanks for the review. Chapter 1 should the up soon.

    Sep 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Alpha - Prologue

    Thanks for your review. I agree, the similes in the first paragraph were overdone. Thanks for the help!

    Sep 30, 2014


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